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解答例
While I was taking a walk, I occasionally stopped and took in the views of the river.
解説
問題文 散歩の途中で時々足を止めて、幅広い川面をゆっくり見渡した。
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- 散歩する：take a walk
- 時々：ocasionally, sometime
- ～を見渡す：take in the view of ～ ※take in the view で「景色を楽しむ」という意味になります。
僕の英作文
While I was taking for a walk, I occasionally stopped and looked slowly around over the wide river.
ネイティブからのアドバイス
You can either say “While I was taking a walk” or “While I was going for a walk”.
The expression “looked slowly around over the river” contains too many prepositions.
To describe taking your time while taking in the view, you can also say:
“I occasionally stopped and gazed at the river.”
You can also say: “I took my time, occasionally interrupting my walk to gaze at the river.”
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